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Heavy Weight of Darkness


Reviewed by Doreen Chombu for Readers’ Favorite #5

Heavy Weight of Darkness is a dystopian science fiction novel by J.M. Erickson. It follows the transformative journey of Willard Bennett, a first-class patrician citizen, who was imprisoned and stripped of his class status and privileges. After he recruits Cassandra Kurtz, she rebels on her mission to Mars, leaving Bennett to face the consequences of her actions. To regain his freedom, Bennett is tasked with finding and killing her. As he investigates Cassandra’s life, he discovers the injustices and corruption that form the foundation of the society he once admired. This leads to a total transformation as he confronts his complicity in a brutal regime. Bennett still needs to find Cassandra, but he is uncertain about the outcome of their meeting.

Heavy Weight of Darkness is a sequel to Endless Fall of Night, which tells Cassandra’s story. J.M. Erickson continues the story from Bennett’s point of view. The book is set in a dystopian world where racism, slavery, and imperialism are prevalent, and the upper class seeks to expand their control over the lower classes and other planets. This story is about redemption, morality, and transformation, and its themes will resonate with many readers. The lessons can be applied to our lives, encouraging us to reflect on our own choices and the potential for change within ourselves. The narrative also reminds us that no matter how far we stray, there is always an opportunity for forgiveness and moral growth. The novel tackles relevant social issues such as segregation, exploitation of minors, and slavery, advocating for equality and justice for the oppressed. The sneak peek at the end hints at an intriguing and exciting continuation of the characters' journeys, leaving readers eager to discover what comes next for Bennett, Cassandra, and the other characters. Overall, this is great work! – 5 stars


US Review of Books 

Heavy Weight of Darkness
by J.M. Erickson

Book Review by Kate Robinson

 "I now understand what Kurtz meant in one of her transmissions about the ‘heavy weight of darkness killed them.’"

Earth’s Third Great Republic is in further crisis due in part to the news of Cassandra Kurtz freeing slaves and plebs on Mars. Meanwhile, her depredations of Martian colonies have cost billions in lost revenue. Willard Bennett’s previous mission imploded because of his failure to eliminate Kurtz when he was delivering her to Mars for an arranged marriage. Plucked from prison, Bennett is given a second chance. He is reinstated as acting captain in the Plebian Auxiliary Corps Task Force. Court-ordered to locate Kurtz, Bennett is charged with destroying her base of operations, executing her and all mutinous members of Bennett’s former crew, and returning all property, particularly slaves.

Just hours before the mission begins, Bennett delves into Kurtz’s psych files to better understand her motivation, and he makes a brief trip into Delta Exchange, a market where humans are bought and sold for labor and sexual pleasure. Kurtz was lost in the market for just thirty minutes as a child, an experience that radicalized her and which erodes Bennett’s confidence in Earth’s social order in just half the time.

Bennett, the former captain of the light cruising ship Jefferson Davis, and Cassandra Kurtz, a convicted terrorist formerly known as Cassandra IX, meet again four years after their original confrontation in this gritty sequel to Erickson’s Endless Fall of Night. Tight writing, fast pacing, prodigious conflict, and a knack for no-frills description make Erickson’s dystopian thrillers a good bet for sci-fi readers also interested in the complexities of racial and class inequity, extreme capitalism, and imperialism. Erickson also takes a creative spin on fictive environments on Mars and the fantastic flora, deadly fauna, and unique conditions underground that make any human journey there nearly impossible as Bennett and two selected crew members seek their elusive quarry.

RECOMMENDED by the US Review

Self-Publishing Review

Heavy Weight of Darkness

by J.M. Erickson

The interplanetary “terrorist” Cassandra Kurtz has become a liberatory force to be reckoned with, terrorizing the wealth-wielding Patrician class by freeing slaves and disrupting their colonization efforts on Mars. Acting Captain Thomas Bennett, after two years of reputational destruction and imprisonment for failing to kill that same rebel leader when he had the chance, is given a redemptive shot at revenge. However, Bennett’s experiences on the opposite side of the truncheon have changed him, and with eyes opening to the evils that drive and defend society, his critical mission is becoming more complicated by the day.

Reflecting the dark truth of humanity’s history of colonialism, slavery, and racialized oppression, this slow-burning book is an ominous prophecy about concentrated power and wealth inequality, and a warning not to repeat, revive, or forget humanity’s tragic errors of the past. Couched within the action and sci-fi intrigue, the novel is also a multilayered exploration of the struggle and humility of changing one’s ideology or beliefs, a crucial aspect of personal growth that feels sorely lacking in today’s deeply divided world.

While the action sequences and revolutionary stakes are riveting on their own, the probing philosophies and radical ideas are where the book really thrives, elevating the emotional core of this twisting plot, and transcending other works in the genre. - SPR 

Kirkus Review

Heavy Weight of Darkness


Genre: Science Fiction / Dystopia

Reviewed by Elizabeth Reiser


"A cinematic sci-fi dystopia following one man's search for redemption."


           In J.M. Erickson's Heavy Weight of Darkness, readers follow former military officer Willard Bennett as he confronts the consequences of his past actions. Bennett, once a first-class patrician, has been stripped of everything that allowed him privileges in society. Instead of being revered, he is now just like the people he once found deplorable. To regain his freedom and the life he misses, Bennett must find the person who helped put him in this state. Once he captures the rebellious Cassandra Kurtz, he then must kill her.

                    It is a slow-burn start to the book, but the reader stays interested up and through the embarking of his adventure. Bennett does not work alone on his task, and his cohorts are the ones who help open his eyes to the truth. Working with the mysterious Betsy Ann Hall on his mission to capture Cassandra, they engage in conversations where he is forced to confront and question what he has always believed. Betsy and their other sidekick Virgil balance one another nicely, with Betsy being frank and Virgil more malleable until he finds his way. Their conversations range from serious topics like racism to humorous ones where they tease one another in a genuine, likable way. Combined, they make a great trio. Cassandra is not seen much in this story. 

          As a sequel to Erickson’s Endless Fall of Night, which follows Cassandra closely, this book focuses primarily on Bennett. While this can be read as a standalone, reading the first installment would provide more context to understand the nuances of Bennett’s tumultuous relationship with Cassandra. It should also be noted that this series uses Joseph Conrad’s Heart of Darkness as inspiration. Like Conrad, Erickson focuses on how different power dynamics work within classes, race, and morality. The topic is heavy, but it makes for an entertaining read nonetheless. Fans of the science fiction genre and classic books like Conrad’s will enjoy this one. Heavy Weight of Darkness reads like watching a movie—and an exciting one at that. What a terrific job Erickson has done in creating this world. - Independent Book Review

Kirkus Review - Heavy Weight of Darkness 


           Set in a near future, Erickson’s SF novel—a reimagining of Joseph Conrad’s Heart of Darkness—follows an alleged terrorist on Mars and the man tasked with killing her.


           Former captain Willard Bennett has been in prison for more than two years, mostly due to his failure to complete a mission involving Cassandra Kurtz, a convicted insurrectionist whose attacks on Mars’ colonies has challenged “the very foundation of [the Third Republic] society” and jeopardized the fascist government’s expansion on Mars. (The Third Republic is considered a successor to the Third Reich.) After having his elite patrician status and all of its benefits revoked, Bennett is given a last chance at redemption: He must locate and destroy Kurtz’s base of operations on the red planet and assassinate the elusive terrorist. Once Bennett begins going through confidential files chronicling Kurtz’s nightmarish past, however, he experiences an epiphany of sorts—his privileged existence has allowed him to sleepwalk through a reality that includes slavery, sex trafficking, and the dehumanization of entire populations of people. His search for Kurtz through the subterranean wilds of Mars—which are populated by genetically modified beasts—quickly turns into a search for himself as he is forced to reevaluate his entire life and all of his misinformed decisions.

         

The cast of deeply developed characters and the impressive focus on worldbuilding are obvious strengths, as is the relentless pacing, but the novel’s real power comes from its timely thematic punch: “I can easily see why it would be better to be free in hell than a servant above” (John Milton joins Conrad in the novel’s literary allusions. Erickson ends the novel with a tantalizing revelation, which could easily be expanded into future installments of the series.


          A page-turning cautionary tale providing a glimpse into a world in which greed, racism, and hate shape our future.

US Review of Heavy Weight of Darkness